This is my first attempt on acrostics. So I would appreciate criticisms and comments. Thanks.
Prompt # 1 DANCING
Dangerous
Actions and
Never ending
Commotion.
Impulsive
New moves, now
Gone...
Prompt # 2 JAM
Joy swelling,
Aching for
Magical motions.
Prompt # 3 THRILLER
Thoughts
Haunting the
Riddled
Insides.
Lounging and
Lumbering in an
Emotional
Ride.
Prompt # 4 SMOOTH CRIMINAL
Shadows
Moving
On and
Over
The law.
Hungering for
Crime, they
Reach
Inside for
Mindless
Insight.
Numb and
Always
Lawless.
Prompt # 5 OFF THE WALL
Prompt # 6 CRY
Calling, and
Reaching out for
You.
Prompt # 7 Michael Jackson
Prompt # 8 Earth Song
Every
Angel
Roared and
Truth's
Howling:
"Save
Our earth
Now before its
Gone"
Prompt # 9 She's out of my life
Sad,
Heartbroken,
Empty but
Sober.
Over you, yet
Under emotional
Trauma.
Our hearts
Free.
Mine and
Your
Love seemed
Impregnable, yet it
Finally
Ended
I will finish the other acrostics later. :) This is in response to acrostic prompts from Acrostic Only.
Wednesday, July 1, 2009
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Theo these are very good!
ReplyDeleteWelcome to Acrostic Only, glad you joined the fun.
I know this can't be your first attempt at acrostic, because you have it down pat. The fewer words, the better, and you did so much with the words you choose. Thank you for joining us. These are inspiring.
ReplyDeleteI love your acrostics...and you did so many of them. I especially love the acrostic for JAM the most but these were all nicely done. Hope you do some again next week.
ReplyDeleteTake care : )
Oh I so like these, but you forgot to complete "off the wall".
ReplyDeleteI just can't think of a subject on off the wall... Well, I guess this is all what I can do for this week. :)
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